Iz, my LOVE, where have you gone?

Aside from Wales, obviously.

Ooh interesting. Have to say I really love the beginning - it's strong, fascinating and evocate...but the ending seemed to lose a little of that punch. Still, I love the idea of the heartbeat being louder not stronger and feeling it rock through you. Nice work.

WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT POETRY?You make me feel inadequate. Sniff."It rocks me gently

Like a lullaby"

IT BE FAB IT BE FAB