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| Flore Verde 2007-12-20 ch 1,  | abuseso serene..so soothing. how can something so calm bring so many realizations?? Never quit |
| phantom-jedi 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseA nice poem about rain. I would suggest that you put an extra space between different "stanzas": i.e. between the different drops of rain. Not too bad for a young writer: you seem to have a good sense of the descriptive. Keep writing and improving! phantom_jedi |
| Beautifula 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseYay! Another rain lover! Beautifully written and goes through all emotions. Lovely! |
| bigtina59 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseSo amazing |
| je suis une pomme du terre. 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseomg Kimiko! Amazing! I love rain a lot too ^.^ I love your new name it's awesome! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI like the motif of water, nice. |
| unspecified 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseAMAZING! I reallt like it. it rythms in someplaces, and not in others, try to keep a more steady beat... ;) i told u i would!!iluand it's amazing |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseVivid and wonderfully natural. The portrait of the speaker in rain comes across well. Good work. |
| Kodama 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseVery thought invoking, I love the rain too, and I think you did a good job on this poem, I think I saw one type-o but that was all, keep up the good work |