Wow, this was amazing. You're a great poet. I enjoyed this thoroughly.

Thank's so much for pointing that out! I had no idea those lines were on the left like that. things are always going wrong with my poems when I try to space between the stanzas. anyway no offense taken. I appreciate your tactfulness (I ramble on also ^-^). Great poem by the way. Thanks for the review.

~Jen

you write with such an original, compelling POV on truth. your work is amazing!

I love this poem. It lets readers draw their sort of own conclusions on what it's about. I like the last four lines of the poem the most. Very nice. *favs*

Beautiful poem. =)

Lovely. The last stanza is my favorite.

Wow, Jamie... you're awesome! ^_^ This is great! This is my favorite part:

"She doesn’t feel the fear

Until she meets with your applause.

Inappropriate, it makes her pause.

Your approval is insincere;"

My Favorite Lines:

"She doesn't feel the fear until she meets with your applause..."

"She thinks it's fate; there's no debate. Her frieght-light steps must turn to hate."

Interesting subject matter; I like it. When reading it, I kept invisioning an evil mutant rat (because of the claws) openig one of those music boxes with the ballerinas inside...

.:*§*:. Calliope Veronica .:*§*:.

This is a wonderful little story. It was a little hard for me to fine the rhythm, but I really like the content. Thanks for the review!

Beautifully dark. Excellent rhyme. . . doesn't seem forced; it flows wonderfully. Sort of scary, very caged and just trapped. Makes me feel squirmy.

This is a good poem. If I read it right I understand what you're talking about. Women are so discrased by the sluts and whores in this world. You're a very talented writer! 5/5!