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Ok. Strange. Could be continued.

perfect descriptions here. it's so vivid and i love how you've just let this utterly sad last line develop to give such a bitter tone.

gorgeous little vignette.

.:midnight:.

It's great.. short and sweet. I love it. Kind of... yeah. it's neat. Great brief description, that gives a full technicolour image of the whole scene... I dunno... it's awesome!!

~Aquila XOX

Wow..i loved this...hands down, loved it. Short, but the imagery was brilliant and the last few lines are just so good i cant explain^_^ Well done^_^ Review me sumtime^_^