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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseQuite elegant and emotionally moving. I did particularly favor the motif of water, sand, sun and the feeling of rising to meet adversity. The assonance in line "shoals and stony points" was appealing. Very nice. |
| Ophelia's Crown 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseah so you're finally 'finished.' ...though all poems are never fully done now, aren't they? well in your attempt to model your work after my favorite poet- you succeeded in capturing his tone, yet I still think that 'your' tone suits you better. and although I don't know whether to be gracious that I 'helped' in fabricating this wonderful set, or to be worried I am now impersonating Shiva... I'm still very sure of one thing- that it was beautiful. |