Reviews for The Marriage Contract

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faithful.dream 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abusei LOVE this story !
darkfallenangel18 2008-06-08 ch 22,	abuseThis has got to be one of the best stories ever. I loved it so much.
c2heart1420 2008-02-10 ch 5,	abusei wish i found this story before...i'm loving it...nice job..
ZsaZsa 2008-01-31 ch 22, anon.	abuseLovely and sad ending! Great story!
cherrypiesizzle 2007-11-12 ch 1,	abuseInteresting
Sum1 stole ur story 2007-11-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI happened across a card captor story exactly like urs. SOmeone is stealing stories from this site but the jackass is recreating them with the exact same summary and title just changing names. REport them heres the link she is darkstar of ice
BrownEyedBeauty 2007-06-05 ch 22,	abuseReally nice story, I liked it a lot. Very sweet. Good writing too :D Keep it up!
em 2007-05-30 ch 22, anon.	abusejust read marriage contract... one word AMAZING!! the ending was perfect:) written really well
honey splattered brains 2007-05-24 ch 22,	abuseSuch a nice story. I didn't cry though.
nameless 2007-05-19 ch 5, anon.	abusehey. u rly ought to watch out for ur spellings and grammar mistakes. If you're planning to write more stories in the near future, just be careful. n u write as if ur in hurry. take it slow and enjoy it if u rly do love writing. cheers. btw,u do have a good plot, not exactly the most original but good.
ophelia 2007-05-13 ch 1, anon.	abusei hope u dont take my comments to the heart..its not supposed to make u sad...just to help you develop in your writing.. i think you have a lot of talent and potential..you just need to think through your plots a little better and give your story time to develop.. you dont even have to listen to me...soo just keep writing.. bye
ophelia 2007-05-13 ch 22, anon.	abuseyoure story is okay..but most of it doesnt make sense...like jakes mom...wats with the creepy woman..nothing happened...you made it sound like she was plotting somthing and you dropped her from your story causing your plot to crumble...the other thing is jake says he hates his law firm and stuff and in the next chapter when he tells miranda hes shutting it down she sounds soo surprised and says "but jake i thought you loved your law firm"..um...i thought u established that he didnt..and the woodpecker is supposed to be dead cuz you killed it in a previous chapter..if mirandas in her 80s her kids should be in their 40s 50s maybe early 60s since she married jake when she was 26...oo and when jake tells miranda to leave cuz her visit is affecting her parents..wat up with that..shes there to pretend to be his wife...he tells her to leave..she goes..but comes bak and suddenly hes her hero cuz he told his mom off? i do like your story but your plot needs a little brushing up..seriously it is good...
krazie-rockstarr 2007-02-19 ch 22,	abusegreat story! awesome
Anon. 2007-01-27 ch 22, anon.	abuseMiranda sounds like a 15 yr-old with Tourette's.
killer chipmunk 2007-01-23 ch 6,	abuseDo you think it's to early to be having them attracted to each other?It kinda seems like it.

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