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| Fujimi 2006-07-12 ch 1,  | abusePretty good. I liked how it could be used as symbolism for one thing corrupting another or how once a color or thing is touched by something else that is darker, it can never be what it was. Or it could be read as a simple poem citing how three colors can change each other. Good job. |