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Reviews For: lightfooted loss of innocence

Sweetly Sarcastic
2006-08-13
ch 1,
abuseaww... this is cute. and the sneaking out part... i think every teenage girl can relate
awannabewriter
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abuseWhoa. this is kind of suggestive. Brilliant. Simply brilliant.
Meine Orange Aiwa
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abuseIt's interesting how you made it seem like a kid going on an adventure in the begining, but swiftly turned the scene into her finding love.

>:D
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