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| onyxdragonflyy 2006-08-11 ch 1,  | abuselol.. How cute!! Very imaginative... v^^v |
| awannabewriter 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseThats cool and imaginative. But what they hey diddle diddle is a "randy rabbit" Did you just make it up? |
| Leaving Here 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abusewe have a cute one here! love the last 2 lines!~Liz |
| Honor Bound 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abusei loved this. makes me think of life going on even as yours seems to have stoped. very good, a fav. |
| Ssinjin Nilah 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI love the alliteration, it really is an adorable poem and it made me smile, even though the end is kind of sad. it's a great idea and you developed it really well. nice job :) |