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| swfan34 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWow! I've just started reading some of your work, and besides being a great reviewer, you're not so bad as a writer! And believe me, it takes on to know one! ^^ |
| TheDivineCreations 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, weirdly I think I'm a much bigger fan of your poetry than some of your longer stories(Hope you arent offended). I think they are much more universal, with how you speak in a manner that both young and older teenagers can identify with. Good Job, very sincere and keep writing! |
| daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseHmm...this one was a little confusing but in the good way. I mean, it makes you think, you know? So it's about a girl who has become like the girls that she critisizes, which, at some point I think we all do that so I loved that you put that in the poem:) I'd like to know what she was saying sorry for but it lets you put yourself in the poem so that's good. Like, maybe the girl dissapointed a boyfriend, friend or family member, 'the one that she loves' could be anyone and I like that you did that too! Overall, it's really good:D |
| Taylary Daisuke 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseAw, to me it seems like you need a big, warm, and wholesome hug. At least that's why I do since my human spirit gets hurt everytime I see someone crying. Nice poem indeed, I'm glad I allowed myself to read an, ugh, poem. I don't particullary enjoy reading them but this one is an exception to that rule. When empty tears speak louder than meaningless words. |