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| A. Akira 2008-03-30 ch 9, anon. | abuseI'm really enjoying your story. It's extremely well written and your character development is awesome. All your characters, even the supporting ones, have a depth to them -- which is very engaging for readers such as myself. One thing tho, you've misspelled "waist" as "waste" in a few places. I'm usually not so picky, but the rest of your writing is so flawless that I thought I'd give you a heads up. Anyway, I'm usually too lazy to review -- but I just wanted to add my plea for you to update...soon! |
| amleey 2008-02-21 ch 8,  | abuseNew reader here! I really... really like your story! I like the simplicity of it all and how it's in a college's setting. Anyways, I'm super-duper curious of what's going to happen with Al and Zach. I have my hopes but yah.. heh. In the earlier chapter, I love the moment when Danny kissed her. I even hope he has something for her. hahah. I'm kinda shock that Jaime is dating Zach...=[ Update soon.. It's been a few months.. hahah. until the next chapter! |
| samka 2008-01-15 ch 9, | abuseAw, where'd you go? I really, really like this story. Please update soon, please? |
| chic rebel 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abusei love this story and i've been wanting to know what happens next. so when you find time, i hope you'll update. :) |
| Linece 2007-11-02 ch 9, | abuseMore ? =) I'm in love with your story and I just want you to update soon! *puppy eyes* Please ? Al is **' awesome, yeah. I agree! ^^ |
| goodbyemylover 2007-10-14 ch 9, | abusethe whole falling off of the couch thing...hilarious, lol. i really like this story, i hope you update soon!! |
| your harbor 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story you got here, you did a great job on it! |
| chic rebel 2007-08-04 ch 9, | abusei love this story. it was cute that you made zach do the pumping of the fist in chapter 8. and he's dating jaime??!?!?! woah, jeeze. update soon please, becuase i love it. :D |
| crazy4thesun 2007-08-04 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter, can't wait for more! |
| wandless 2007-08-02 ch 9, | abuseAwesome chapter! I'm sure I've read your story before, but I got a little chapter update message and then I reread your whole story. It's pretty good! Seems to be developing a bit slowly though. Can't wait to see how this Zach thing turns out. Please update soon! |
| The Cat Died Nobly 2007-08-01 ch 9, | abuseCute story. Hoping to see more of it! *alerts* |
| Broken Wrist 2007-07-13 ch 8, | abuseZach is a jerk. That is all other than good story. NS |
| Mysti Geiger 2007-07-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseOmg, i love this story! Can't wait for more! Update soon! |
| substitute angel 2007-07-13 ch 8, | abuseOMG! You updated! WOOT! OK, this chapter was great. I loved the action and the way you ended it was perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next chapter. The drama builds with each chapter and I'm so hyped. I can't wait. Update soon! |
| lidia 2007-07-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseWhy don't they talk to each other? They were such close friends when they were younger. |