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| noexitwound 2006-07-12 ch 1,  | abusethis is wonderful!! you have a great way of manipulating words into something i've never seen before. this line those titles look like promises is captivating. it completely got me caught up and i'm looking forward so much to the rest of it (if this wasn't a one shot) great work. you're description is perfect. its simple and strays away from huge vocabulary, but it still sounds beautiful. and i admire that a lot. |