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| I.O.K.O 2006-07-21 ch 1,   | A little common, but all and all seemed kind of romantic. |
| mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2006-07-21 ch 1, | this is amazing writing! it flows well, the theme is great. just keep it up! |
| L. Lazuli 2006-07-21 ch 1, | pretty cool. the ending's good. your lines are very beautiful =) -llazuli- |
| JAGreenDay 2006-07-15 ch 1, | Aw Men Men Men... BLAH! lol ... if he breaks it, i shall break his precious, lol! J.A. |
| unspecified 2006-07-14 ch 1, | I really like this... it's contest good. thanks for reviewing!! love, me |
| a lonely september 2006-07-13 ch 1, | this was good, i liked it. it had a nice beat to it. it had hope, love, mistakes but more hope... it was pretty. and nicely done. the way the poem is written i dont think its ending too well, but its quite good. you did a nice job... : ) |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-07-13 ch 1, | Excellent, by far. |