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JtheChosen1
2008-08-17
ch 11,
abuselooks really good here! keep up the good work!
CrayonMentality
2008-06-24
ch 4,
abuseI seriously ADORE Manny. I hope nothing bad happens to him!! :-/
CrayonMentality
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseAh, poor Manny. I love him, he's so endearing. Nice to see a chubby character for once!

I was beginning to believe they didn't exist. *_*
navajo
2008-06-17
ch 11,
abuselove the story i really hope that you will continue it im always rooting for the underdog
aripie
2008-06-13
ch 11,
abusethis story is fantastic - i cant wait to read more (when the update happens lol) its original and interesting so here are my pleas! hahaah
forbiddenstars
2008-06-09
ch 11, anon.
abuseooh. this is new; a slashy story without two omgi'msopretty boys as the main characters...this is interesting.

it would be wonderful if you could continue...

=D
bookworm-lovingedward
2008-05-25
ch 11,
abuseeek! i like it, hurry up and update!! its weird having a change from ur steryotype 'perfect' guy, and Im still adjusting, but I really like the story, update! (please?)
Sasquatch
2008-05-14
ch 11,
abuseI love this!~ it has a sense of reality ^.^;; and its adorable
Ayimil Taddy
2008-03-29
ch 11,
abuseOh! Your story is incredibly well written. The characters also stay in character(something I find that doesn't happen too often). I really like the idea of Manny and Derek. Please continue this wonderful story. I would really like to know how it ends.
mia5081
2008-01-13
ch 11,
abuseOoh, I really like this story so far :D

Update soon!
Phoenex360
2008-01-03
ch 11,
abuseYeah, the world definately needs more stories like this! There are other stories on outcasts, but mostly they're about things that aren't possible, like Naruto and his nine-tailed fox. XP Anyways, I really love this story. ^.^ It really is believable, and that's hard to achive. I love all the charracters (even Jim. He can't help that he's an **.) except Noah (he just acts like a rich snob). This story is put together very well, I might add, though I did find some significant errors in your grammar and spelling. ^_~ I hope your mom gets better! Update soon!

~360~
Back of Beyond
2007-12-29
ch 11,
abuseLove this story - hope you update soon! :]
Duuude
2007-12-21
ch 11,
abuseHaha. Manny's acting like a kid. The "But, mom!". Every kid says that, I guess mothers always get their way, eh?
Anywhoo.. looks like things aren't completely ruined between our Manny and Derek.
I know people say it's cliche and all. I thought that.. I don't know.. being with Derek would help Manny change his habits and become better, physically and emotionally. So yeah, yeah I want that to happen! Haha. =] It better. >.<
xD
And sorry for just kind of popping up out of nowhere at chapter ten. I did come across this story today so.. I can't speak or review until I'm done all that's written. That's my excuse. Hehe. Nice story so far.. Looking forward to Manny and Derek's relationship building.. And maybe Jim growing up because he really needs to get over highschool. Cause life isn't like highschool at all. Argh. I hate people like Jim and Noah, making people like Manny feel sad.
Oh yeah and what's wrong with the name Maurice.. I remember distinctly having a crush on a guy with the name. He's also in one of my classes. No crush now.. though we don't talk all that much. Hmm..
Anyway.. Keep writing. I get off topic way too much. Heheh. Bye!
Elkica
2007-11-21
ch 11,
abuseOh, I really like Manny, he's so shy and nice; and to tell you the truth I would like to get my hands on him, so that I could teach him, show him couple of things. I hope you'll continue with the story.
pfeiffer
2007-11-06
ch 11,
abusethis is something new... never actually read a story here in FP that has someone as Manny as the main character... poor Manny! I feel for him...

when will this be updated? and what about the rest of your stories?
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