You know, I think we have alot in common. These are how my feelings are to a certain person. Can't live with them, and can't live without them. One of my poems that is non-rhyming as I call it kinda has the same theme as this one

Wow. The emotion is brilliant. One of the most revealing free-verse poems I have read in quite a while.

Beautiful.

hum, I think I read this.. but I didn't review it, so... I'm reviewing it! good poem, I like the "I trusted you/ with my most precious possession/ my heart" part exspecially

A cliche topic written in a very original way. Beautiful.

aww *hug* I'm sorry... I like the poemthough 'specially the 8th and ninth linescall me now!

:( So sad. Well written darling. I hope you're okay. *gives you choc-chip cookies*, keep writing! (It's so good to get the emotions out, yeah?)

Anna _

Did he hurt you? Nuh-Uh (he better not have) ! E-mail me.

Good poem.