Very well done; I love that the Persephone character drove the story rather than the Hades.

I love this myth and your retelling of it. Gosh, I was gonna do my own with the nightclub thing but not anymore. Ah, great minds do think alike. Lol, anywho. Great story! :D

I'm a huge fan of greek mythology so this adaptation of the Persephone/Hades myth was right up my alley. Usually when reading stories depicting the two hades always comes out being overbearing and I've never read a story that depicted Persephone with anytype of personality. i enjoyed this story very much.

Also i want to thank you for readind my story. Your reviews have been very helpful. I just wanted to say that nothing is set in stone. It is only a first draft and sometimes I revise my chapters so nothing really stays the same for long.

I like your story. It's perfect! Please write more.