So this is the best of your stories I've read thus far. The entire thing is beautifully written, the concept of it is original, keep it up.

The way that you use words can truly be considered a work of art. its like you take the individual words and weave them together to create the most beautiful tapestry ever that anyone has ever imagined.

wow. that was a wonderful story... you are incredibly at mixing the spiritual with the erotic and the mystical. never stop writing!