I love the specific details and imagery of this poem, especially in the watercolor stanza. Your enjambment is seamless, so I never lost the thread of the poem. I also loved the line that trailed off with the ellipses, it left a lot to the imagination.

this is really pretty. I like the imagery, word choice. I love the last stanza especially.

this is so artistic and poetic and beautiful. the merging is so gorgeous. i love it. i wish i could write like this.

"legs touching lightly/it's the heat seeping through pants/and i think ofthe close softness of skin and rushing breath./it was dark out,/just the rain and the stars and/and us."

skjdhsjkdf this poem. every inch of it is just love to me. one of those really special things that just makes you. stop.

i love "we could never belong to each other/when we already/belong to the world." beautiful.

-aly

those images dance together beautifully

every line belongs

comes from somewhere and goes somewhere else

keep writing!

This is just amazing. I can't even choose a favorite line. It was very beautiful, your descriptions are very vivid. Keep writing!

Beautiful.

Just fucking beautiful.

That first line owns my soul at this point, its lovely.

* Noelle