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Reviews For: HomesickHomecoming

squeaky314
2006-07-18
ch 1,
abuseYeah - turbulence does suck. I like how this poem is so personal. It just has "Dottie" all over it. I missed you, too!
Socially-Awkward
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseI like the way you split this up. Neat idea. Props 4 mentioning karate. Hansuki Hotties all the way! love the ending.
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