hey! i already reviewed this, lol (Ang-Dev) but just wanted to say: happy birthday to your friend! how old does she turn? (we may be twins parted at birth) LOL kidding :) keep up the awesome work tho :)

mez

a very strong ending.

Wow, painful. Seems like I'm not the only one who cant forget bad memories. I like how some of it isnt even about the death, its about somebody else's wedding, but it connects so well into the poem.

sad and beautifully written.. I love the ending... awesome piece

is this based on truth? if it is, im so sorry. its beautifully written and the flow is just wonderful. ur word-choice makes it so endearingly heart-touching and the emotions are conveyed wonderfully. sorry i havent reviewed in a long time. luv u lots, hope ur well...u SHOULD be with all these Summer holidays! lol. anyway, hav a brill summer:)

mez aka FunkyFlower14/Ang

Its poignant, haunting and just hurts you were you feel the most; it is perfect, seriously.

I love it, in all its glory.

* Noelle