the whole poem rang wonderfully! i thought these lines were a perfect beginning "Silence utters her last

In the moment of the past"

Keep writing in your incredible style. you inspire us all.

~the Stranger in the moonlight~

Whoo.. this was intense and catchy, vividly detailed and marvelous. Excellent job, keep writing!

Wow...another good poem *Adds 2 favs* I really liked this. Like i said previously, u have such an awesome and uniqe way or writing. It is great...love it, keep it up^_^

wowie... this is awesome... almost has a haunting feeling to it. great job :) write on,

-Em

Oh, very good, I like this one. I will most definately have to read more of your stuff.

~Nyght

damn! that's absolutely amazing, love the passion.

Very nice very nice. It gives you this haunting, while at the same time longing feel...nicely done. I like the 'Awaiting time's lethal ammunition' that was certainly interesting...

~*~Anu V

Oh creepy @_@ but I still like it a lot. I especially like the 'peering beyond my window' part :)

Silence utters her last- i love that first line. any way great poem, i loved it. this is probably my favourite poem of yours.

keep writing

Godly Luke Staden

this is a great poem, i like the flow and the emotion of it, great job.

Wow, very beautifully written. I really like the last line. Awesome work! Keep writing!! ^_^ ~Sara

"Falling upon you lips

Spilling blood that stains the fingertips"

God, gorgeous. Lovely poem.

Very well-written. Keep it up!

This poem is pretty good, short and not very deep(detailed), but it holds the mystery that you see in these nightmares. The words you chose are also very... candy-like. I'm not sure if that made sense, but in any case, I thank you for writing this piece. It has a cool feeling to it, which I enjoyed. :)

This is a weird note. I had these nightmares that would not stop so I wrote this poem. It is all about this nightmare that keeps coming to vist me almost every night. I wrote it in hopes this nightmare will go away. Thanks for reading to anyone who wants to.

HUGS & KISSES