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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-10-04 ch 1,  | abusethe whole poem rang wonderfully! i thought these lines were a perfect beginning "Silence utters her last In the moment of the past" Keep writing in your incredible style. you inspire us all. ~the Stranger in the moonlight~ |
| Ashes.to.Acid 2006-09-02 ch 1, | abuseWhoo.. this was intense and catchy, vividly detailed and marvelous. Excellent job, keep writing! |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseWow...another good poem *Adds 2 favs* I really liked this. Like i said previously, u have such an awesome and uniqe way or writing. It is great...love it, keep it up^_^ |
| Emmytastic gal 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abusewowie... this is awesome... almost has a haunting feeling to it. great job :) write on, -Em |
| Completely Incomplete 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseOh, very good, I like this one. I will most definately have to read more of your stuff. ~Nyght |
| Justyn Mikail 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abusedamn! that's absolutely amazing, love the passion. |
| Anusari Vairanon 2006-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice very nice. It gives you this haunting, while at the same time longing feel...nicely done. I like the 'Awaiting time's lethal ammunition' that was certainly interesting... ~*~Anu V |
| Amoreaero 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseOh creepy @_@ but I still like it a lot. I especially like the 'peering beyond my window' part :) |
| Godly Luke Staden 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseSilence utters her last- i love that first line. any way great poem, i loved it. this is probably my favourite poem of yours. keep writing Godly Luke Staden |
| myheartwantsyou 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abusethis is a great poem, i like the flow and the emotion of it, great job. |
| poemkitten7 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, very beautifully written. I really like the last line. Awesome work! Keep writing!! ^_^ ~Sara |
| classic violet 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuse"Falling upon you lips Spilling blood that stains the fingertips" God, gorgeous. Lovely poem. |
| xXShattered SerenityXx 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseVery well-written. Keep it up! |
| Padimate 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is pretty good, short and not very deep(detailed), but it holds the mystery that you see in these nightmares. The words you chose are also very... candy-like. I'm not sure if that made sense, but in any case, I thank you for writing this piece. It has a cool feeling to it, which I enjoyed. :) |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a weird note. I had these nightmares that would not stop so I wrote this poem. It is all about this nightmare that keeps coming to vist me almost every night. I wrote it in hopes this nightmare will go away. Thanks for reading to anyone who wants to. HUGS & KISSES |