good poem, i think it's good, i really like the theme of finding yourself since it's so peronsonal in one way yet everyone is looking for themselves too so you get a nice mix! love ti great work, thank you for sharing

that sounds like my parents and me...lol

Ooh! the rhythm and everything on this one is just right! But, I do think it would be more powerful if the last three words (so why try) were each on seperate lines.

Cool! I really like this!

i can relate. just be yourself and folks will respect you. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

Coolio i like this

Okay, now I can SERIOUSLY relate! I guess all of us feel that way sometimes! Anyway, great poem once again and i cant wait to check out all you're other stuff!

I can relate to this because I've felt this way before. It's a really good poem, and I enjoyed it. Is the title right? I mean, I'm not an English master, but I think that it should be "Who I Am", not "Whom I Am". You said "who I am" in your poem yourself. "They don't like who I am." Well, keep writing! I enjoy your writing.

this is good =) bc i had friends like that before that didn't like me for who i was. i was like the shy/quiet girl they liked most,but now they hate the new me that has broken out of her own shell. sad isnt it? (lol) but then i had some friends that stuck by my side even with the new me ^^ so very nice poem that i can relate to =)

I can relate. I hate when people try to make you into someone you're not. Good work, keep writing!

Great work, I really enjoyed reading! *applaudes*, write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

Truthfully, I have to say it is good. I like the theme. Sometimes it seems like people just don't get it.

i like the idea, i like the poem, and i've been in the same situation. you just might want to check your spelling/ usage. i noticed you said "prefect" where i think it should have been "perfect" and you said "then" instead of "than". otherwise good job

Yeah yeah. I can relate. Nicely put. I think I just found another one to add to fave stories... umm if you keep trying to please everyone you feel like you are in a tug of war. So don't. Just be you.

Dude, you just... summed up my whole life and everything ive ever thought. keep it up!

Jessica