Interesting...UPDATE! THis is good!!

This is a VERY good story, and the end has a nice bit of humor as well.

wow wow wow that was one amazing story don't you think you finished it a little early ... that was awesome keep it up ( thumbs up ) :)

OOHH! man that was interesting! I WANTED TO READ MORE!! where is the more? -pout- This is really good! I like how she was a different race of people, now that made it all the more interesting.

*grin* I like. *nodnod* I most definitely like.

:) CD

oh dear... what's happened?

oh, I like Cleigh by the way. heehee he falls off the chair...

:D CD

Ooh. this is interesting because it took a different turn, nomrally it'd be the woman's point of view but you've chosen the man's. I like that about your writing. You change everything up ^_^. can't wait for the update!