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| garnetandpearl 2006-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseI love the phrase "red wine night". |
| ode to a firefly 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseReminds me of a prostitute. =P Sorry, but that's just the first thing that popped into my mind. I really like the poem, though. It's very...different from your other poems. ♥Christine |
| boys kiss girls 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseHoly cow! This is insanely deep and I love it. I love how it creates such a whimsical image in my mind. Great job, buddy. |
| classic violet 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseoh my god. beautiful. pure and intoxicating. just lovely. |
| Aquafied 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abusei want to scream "**" and run away.no, but anyway this is alright. i am not sure i like the seemingness of it, i have seen red lipstick on a glass, it isnt like the comericals. it is ** and bad.i dont wear lipstick, i think it is kind of absurd for someone like me. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuselove the words in italic. nice work. |
| i am pookie 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abusei love the imagery and the words you picked to create this poem. all together it's simple, but wonderful. |
| a lonely september 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abusegorgeous poem . . . i love the last line, i love all of this. the essence of it, the everything. fantastic. |