This is really very beautiful. I love how it has a magical feel to it.

Only one word can sum this up: WOW! I going to add this to my favorite stories list... It's deep.

Love this poem! I would pick out favorite lines, but that would take forever since every line is my favorite line!

Beautiful! I really like all the feelings expressed in this poem. It has a really sweet tone. ^_^

Lovely words! such dramatic ones at the right times, with the right descriptions to fit them perfectly! I was a bit saddened by the last two lines though :-( These are not as good as the rest of the poem, being perhaps a bit too "and yeh, that was the end, I guess" ...
Well, the rest was still fantastic :-)

it's official, anything you write is absolutely genius. keep on keepin' on!
^kiki^

I love this poem.Did I spell poem right?Oh well you know what i mean anyways.^^

Your poetry is amazing.

~**~Indiana~*~

Yay I can see how you got friendship as a theme, sorry I know that sounds weird but sometimes I just can't see how the theme fits in. I like your peom it kind of shows how there is a light at the end of the tunnel, and things can get better which contrasts what I would usually read so thanx for the recommending to me to reading some of your peoms. I like the peom. And thanx agian.

The imagery you have used here is amazing! great work.

This one feels as if each word was meant to be there, and it sounds as if each line rhymes with the one before and after it, although in reality it doesn't.

That's the only way I can describe it. Congrats.

Wow, this is so beautiful. Vivid word choice. And I love the metaphor (well, I generally love all poetry and creative writing that has something to do with the stars/or sky/). But this is great. Keep writing.

very inspirational, vivid and descriptive. i loved the "heart's secret dream" and how you compared your heart to "a blue sky, sparkling sea and warm sun around you". thanks for sharing.

i like it...good job! keep it up!
SL

"they've borrowed my drops of sorrow to extinguish the flames". thats a very powerful line. lovely.