I love it. This is probably my favorite one of your poems. I like the way the words flow, and I think you wrote this idea out beautifully. You are a great writer.

wow, i like this poem, like alot. u really r a great writer! _

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Very interesting poem. I liked your imagery, and it's a very interesting concept.

thats good...i really enjoyed reading that...