Normally I'm a very big fan of rhyming... but this was just wonderful. I loved the imagery and the picture you paint with your words. I can see why this is one of your favvies!

An interesting choice of the porcelain doll. Many view them as sheer perfection... but what's on the inside? Hollow. I just loved how you captured that.

Very well done... thank you for sharing!

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Wow...

This was a great concept and very original! You did a great job with the imagry in it and the ending was ace!