hey, just wanted to review some of your stuff right back. Thanks for yuor review! As for this poem, I think it's really beautiful, and really sad. It sounded to me like the person was begging right from the beginning, and then I read the last line. It all came together so well. Very nice work! The titles on your list of pieces are intriguing. Think I'l lread more! :)

Katie *

yup, that was the poem you inspired!

feel honored. ]

i always like it when there are parathentical phrases in poems. i dunno, i can never pull it off, but you did. it's like there's another, more honest voice in the poem.

i like this... & it's given me an idea for a poem of my own!

oh & i was so happy you called "advanced equation" cute. sounds stupid, but that's exactly what i was aiming for. showing i can write more than depressing, dense, mourning poetry. thank you! ]

Aw. Wow... I don't think you /could/ get a last kiss after a speech like that... but that's what makes the whole thing so bitter. Great job.

I'm getting an "I love you, but I can't be with you" vibe here. I like that it seems to confront that idea that sometimes, in real life, love doesn't conquer all.

Thanks for the sweet review.