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| Nobody Wants Reality 2006-11-24 ch 1, | abuseTo begin with i love the title of this story. It would be cool if more description of Blair and Sam occurred. It's short sweet and to the point. you did alot of good work without creating pages to read which sometimes shys a reader away from even beginning to read a story Good Job i look forward to reading the rest ~ Nobody Wants Reality ~ |
| Bob Evans 2006-11-24 ch 3, | abuseO, the plot thickens! The mysterious chest, the unusual lab experiment, and what "does" happen in the 13th hour...? ~Bob Evans |
| Bob Evans 2006-11-20 ch 2, | abuseWow! That's amazing, the story is back on track! I almost thought it was never coming back. Anyways, well, quite interesting turn of events, but it's too early to tell too much. ~Bob Evans P.S. Can I expect a sooner update? |
| Ra-ooo 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI like what I've read already. This story has much great potential. You should really continue this story. If all the chapters will be this short, that's even better. I like to read something when I can take it in small, blindingly-obvious-where-it-ends bits. |
| Celtsea 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the idea, but i think you can add a ton more description to Sam and Blair. Keep writing. Celtsea has a 'thing' for jello. |
| Bob Evans 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseYou have intrigued my interest. The summary instantly grabbed my attention, and I'll will be checking back for future chapters. |