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Pastrami Sauce Camel Soup
2006-07-20
ch 1,
abuseYeah, I do like this. It's cool that you wrote in the style that you were writing about; only smart people do those things :).
Freed by Mercy
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseVery clever!
and calliope said
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseHehe, wonderful. I like how the style mirrors the style you're parodying without too much of a break. They flow into each other smoothly. My worst fear is turning into Dr Seuss.
Nobody-n-Particular
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseCute, much fun to read. I enjoyed your dilemma.
An-Author-At-Heart
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseLOL! This is cute, I like how you poke fun of the tools and styles of writing, and just poetry in general. It's very cute and funny, I enjoyed it a lot. I love the random Lorax (though for some reason I can't remember what a Lorax is...). Oh well, good job!
maxnotevoltage
2006-07-14
ch 1,
abuseHaha! This is fabulous. Really - an awesome piece of poetry. I enjoyed the bit about similes. So true...

Almost a satire... Hehe... And you're right - this stuff makes great poetry, but it can be overdone. ["Maybe I am trying to hard" I think] I liked that line.

Yes, yes... Made me smile. Thanks for the laugh!

-- J.max
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