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| Pastrami Sauce Camel Soup 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I do like this. It's cool that you wrote in the style that you were writing about; only smart people do those things :). |
| Freed by Mercy 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseVery clever! |
| and calliope said 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseHehe, wonderful. I like how the style mirrors the style you're parodying without too much of a break. They flow into each other smoothly. My worst fear is turning into Dr Seuss. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseCute, much fun to read. I enjoyed your dilemma. |
| An-Author-At-Heart 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseLOL! This is cute, I like how you poke fun of the tools and styles of writing, and just poetry in general. It's very cute and funny, I enjoyed it a lot. I love the random Lorax (though for some reason I can't remember what a Lorax is...). Oh well, good job! |
| maxnotevoltage 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseHaha! This is fabulous. Really - an awesome piece of poetry. I enjoyed the bit about similes. So true... Almost a satire... Hehe... And you're right - this stuff makes great poetry, but it can be overdone. ["Maybe I am trying to hard" I think] I liked that line. Yes, yes... Made me smile. Thanks for the laugh! -- J.max |