haha... love the ending. That's a very unfortunate situation to be in. :P Seriously though, I wish your chapters were longer. :/

I liked the beginning, but she's so observant for 6 :P Then again, that's an age where kids can really go either way. But I like it so far. :)

I really like it. It's well written and chalked full of suspense. Keep it going!

PS: JHU offers cool distance classes. ;)

The plot thickens. This is really good. The story is moving a little fast, but I still like it.

I like the modern twist to the Snow white story. I thought, though, that Serena's mother's death would have a greater impact on Serena i.e. does Serena ever get depressed? Did she confide in her friends? Also, it seems too easy to believe that Serena overheard Dora talking about her plans with Kevin. Didn't Dora know better than to talk about such things when she knew Serena was at home? Other than that, the story so far is pretty good & intense! Please update ASAP!

Awesome :D This is Tina, by the way. Update soon please! XD

I always have found modern takes on old fairy tales interesting, and so far the opening has caught my attention. Let's see where it goes...