|Reviews for The Dot|
| Tailored4Dreams 12/15/08 . chapter 1
I was scared and disturbed and a little confuzzled at first but all in all its awesome!
Dots are secretly everywhere!
x o xo
| review-a-holic 7/16/06 . chapter 1
heheh...CUTE...but im sure u've written a whoLE lot moRe...am short of time rite now...but will cheCK them all out...thAts a promise... reviewaholic..thats my url..it'll tell you all about me...just registered again...so will take time till i can put something up myself...till then...KEEP WRITIN...
| Fire Emblem 7/15/06 . chapter 1
That really scared me. Seriously. But it was funny.
| griffensGrace 7/14/06 . chapter 1
where you on neopets during the great dot war?
| Waluigi-Freak-99 7/14/06 . chapter 1
That was . . . strange. Amusing, until you stopped talking about Dot. Dot's the star. I think you should've talked about Dot more.
Anyway, you had quite a few run-on sentences and one or two typos that I'd suggest you fix, but other than that, pretty good.
Will you be writing more?