This was a great story, truly. I loved it and I'm wondering: have you ever thought about entering Theatre? You could work for Original and act this out. I daresay, it would be simply wonderous. It's a great soliloquy of sorts and a unique one at that. So, think about it, if you can. And let me tell you again, great story.

Disenchanted Tragedy

Wow, I loved this. I loved the ending but the main character ** me off. SO self-centered. That last line "Nobody is the centre of my world but me, and I won't let you take that away from me!" I wanted to slap her. Stopw allowing in self-pity y'know? But yea, loved it *cuddles*

Ah, I love one-shots. And the monologue form is kind of cool. This reminds me of my love-hate relationship with my own sister. Parts of it made me want to laugh, but I didn't because it was so.. depressing? angsty? I don't know. Anyway, it was really good, as always. =)

This story was absolutely amazing. I really enjoy one shot stories and I was just in awe of how you finished it. I like how you mixed anger and concern in this arguement to Joyce.

Needless to say I very very very much loved this story. It makes me almost hope that Joyce will find some way to be alright in the end.

I think you just wrote a story portraying every screwed up teenager in the world. And did it very unpatronisingly, unlike shrinks always do.

I actually read some things that sounded like they'd been taken out of my life. So yeah, anyway...

Really good job. It's definetely the best monologue I've ever read.

Intersting. That's definitely a screwed up family and hey - no slash! That's different but I'm not complaining. Sometimes it's refreshing to read another type of story from a slash author.

I liked the fact that it was written like a monolgue. Those are always interesting. I also appreciated the fact that it was easy to follow and wasn't immensely depressing. It was just the right amount of angst.

That's about all I can think about right now. Good job!

Wow.. I loved that.