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| Disenchanted Tragedy 2006-10-31 ch 1,  | abuseThis was a great story, truly. I loved it and I'm wondering: have you ever thought about entering Theatre? You could work for Original and act this out. I daresay, it would be simply wonderous. It's a great soliloquy of sorts and a unique one at that. So, think about it, if you can. And let me tell you again, great story. Disenchanted Tragedy |
| Ril 2006-07-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, I loved this. I loved the ending but the main character ** me off. SO self-centered. That last line "Nobody is the centre of my world but me, and I won't let you take that away from me!" I wanted to slap her. Stopw allowing in self-pity y'know? But yea, loved it *cuddles* |
| multiples of six 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAh, I love one-shots. And the monologue form is kind of cool. This reminds me of my love-hate relationship with my own sister. Parts of it made me want to laugh, but I didn't because it was so.. depressing? angsty? I don't know. Anyway, it was really good, as always. =) |
| XoHikarix 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis story was absolutely amazing. I really enjoy one shot stories and I was just in awe of how you finished it. I like how you mixed anger and concern in this arguement to Joyce. Needless to say I very very very much loved this story. It makes me almost hope that Joyce will find some way to be alright in the end. |
| Totally Raven 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI think you just wrote a story portraying every screwed up teenager in the world. And did it very unpatronisingly, unlike shrinks always do. I actually read some things that sounded like they'd been taken out of my life. So yeah, anyway... Really good job. It's definetely the best monologue I've ever read. |
| blessed-dragon 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseIntersting. That's definitely a screwed up family and hey - no slash! That's different but I'm not complaining. Sometimes it's refreshing to read another type of story from a slash author. I liked the fact that it was written like a monolgue. Those are always interesting. I also appreciated the fact that it was easy to follow and wasn't immensely depressing. It was just the right amount of angst. That's about all I can think about right now. Good job! |
| beth is chill. 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow.. I loved that. |