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| the artist 2006-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nice. i wonder if you have a email addy so i can send you a email.i just want to ask a q.. you can delete this review if you wish, you have ana dont you? |
| Anaare 2006-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseA lovely and beautiful poem, which I have enjoyed reading. Well done! |
| TakeOurTime 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseWhat threw me off was the mention of 'Diamond eyes'.Diamonds are unbreakable, but you portray whom you speak of, whether it be yourself or from someone elses point of view, to be easily broken. Otherwise, the poem was so wonderfully appealing. :) |
| Edgar Wellington 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the first line... Slender figure of purpose. What a way to get the reader's mind in gear! Is the poem a lie? |
| Michaelyo 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI like how this poem is so personal... By the way, my poem was about my dad... |