 tree-frog-man 2006-08-23 . chapter 1It's great. This idea of forced equality works so perfect in a nursery setting. The place where everyone has the same job and babies are all the same on the surface. Very clever futuristic ideas. |
 Naomi Schemer 2006-08-20 . chapter 1Ants, right? It fits perfectly with the idea of ants. I liked it a lot...though I don't see it as sci-fi. |
 Osunale 2006-07-14 . chapter 1I love how the little we know all comes from the conversation of the two nursemaids(?) and secondhand. The reader is left with some interesting information about the world, but without ever seeing anything written outright. The story has a nice touch. |
 KageNeko 2006-07-14 . chapter 1Intresting...a little vauge on descriptions..i got a little confused, try to describe the people better the ones who are talking maybe a little more details on a side note on what their talking about some of the things...other than that really kool ^^ |