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| Carmel March 2007-05-29 ch 1,  | abuseThat was simply wonderful :) ~carm~ |
| a bitter kiss. 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI have to give you credit, I can't string a poem together if my life depended on it. And most of my poems like.. rhyme in that stupid, kiddish way. Like.. "Todd played with a car While I was looking at a star." Ew. But this poem was great. You could feel the emotions in the piece - and I'm sure a lot of people could relate to this - and I feel that's a great accomplishment as a writer. :D |
| Da Vinci at Work 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseSad poem. |
| Plinky 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's really lovely. I can completely relate to that. Very nicely expressed. Keep writing! |
| the lorax is coming 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abusei love this because i have TOTALLY been there...great work |