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| Grey-Mater 2006-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a beautiful poem. A pair of siblings -- one so determined to control emotion at all times at any cost, the other with emotion always exposed. But love over-rides all! I'm quite sure you will be published someday. Your heart and your talent merge and become beautiful words. It is said that a picture is worth a thousand words, but the same could be said of your poems and haikus! |
| fairytale failure 2006-09-18 ch 1,  | abuseIt builds and builds and builds...until "I pushed you from my house once" and after that it all comes crashing down!! sad but awesome. |
| Amandalo 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abusegood work...I actually tried to smother my brother when we were little, but anyway, this is a really good poem, please review back |