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soccerbug12
2008-07-24
ch 48,
abuseokay yeah that was sad but ive been waiting for it now all that has to happen is Jack and Eryn to get together, nice work!!
yayawhynot89
2008-07-23
ch 48,
abuseI really don't like you right now lolz I stayed up to 5am reading this story and what do i get? A big Fat Cliff Hanger! LOLZ I'm so tired. Keep up the good and i'll be patiently...waiting for more. Oh and Dom deserves to suffer.
thecamerawoman
2008-07-22
ch 48,
abuseagain, i repeat: JACK AND ERYN FOREVER.
songlawyer
2008-07-20
ch 39,
abuseWell, once again, I am considerably farther into your story than I was before. Again, like before, I have to say that this is an extremely good story. It is so interesting to have three years of a girl's life compiled into one story. It makes for quite an interesting comparison. Congrats again!
meghish
2008-07-20
ch 48, anon.
abuseOMG! Dom is such an idiot!! Why would he cheat on her? At the end of the last chapter, he promised Eryn he'd be there when she got back--what happened to that?? Despite the annoyingness of Dom, great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens and what he has to say for himself.
songlawyer
2008-07-20
ch 32,
abuseWell I have just finished with her junior year and I really love this story. I think you fit the ace part of it really well into the story and made the reactions of the characters very believable. Although, if I were Eryn, I would have punched him those extra four times. Awesome book so far!
Silly-girl15
2008-07-20
ch 48,
abuseOMG!! so sad! super good chap.
miss.ex.everything
2008-07-20
ch 48,
abuseOkay.

Hello, my name is Mary, nice to meet you, blah blah blah.

So I've read your entire story so far in the last two days. And I haven't reviewed until now, but I do really like your story. I like how realistic this story is. Because some romances are totally unrealistic, but this one's not. So good job on that.

The fact that you are attached to your characters is really not a disorder, every writer is to some extent, if they really feel what they're writing.

And it's terrible, but I love it when people cheat on their boyfriend/girlfriend in a story, especially when everyone hates the cheater once they found out. So...carry on! And it's good that she doesn't hate him, but don't let her forgive him too quickly.

All the other times there were suspicions had an excuse, but he had Stephanie's shirt in his hand. Is there really an excuse for that?

Anyway, great job. Oh, and I alerted this story.
songlawyer
2008-07-20
ch 25,
abuseWell I have made obvious progress in your story and am very pleased. I think you have a real talent for writing and you should see to publishing other works outside of this site. There is humor, drama, wit, and work ethic--all parts of a good novel that you should be proud of having written. Congrats!
WhyySoSerious
2008-07-20
ch 48,
abuseomg i had tears runnon down my face
it was so good!
update when u can!!


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sunny-raindrop
2008-07-20
ch 48,
abuseWow, that was unexpected. I mean, Dom cheating on Eryn and Jack being civil towards her. Like he had no ulterior motives. Not a simply "told you so" or "I'm way better, I'll comfort you, babe". Nothing. Just like a friend. Whoa. I think it's normal if you are attached to your characters. It'd be strange the other way around.
Nefertiry
2008-07-20
ch 48,
abusePlease don't make her forgive him. Please. Please please.

I am now a Jack supporter. And if she has to go back to Dom he should suffer a pain so big AND she should sleep with Jack just because the girl NEVER does anything with another man when she gets cheated on by the "prince."

Oh please please please. I feel the same pain but seriously Dom disappointed me a very long time ago.

And can Stephanie please get disfigured? Thank you.

Please? Please with chocolate on top?
RMluver12
2008-07-19
ch 48,
abuseGreat story,but this chapter upsets me.I really hope Eryn and Dom get together in the end.jack and stephanie are really annoying me i wish they could just leave Eryn and Dom alone.
songlawyer
2008-07-19
ch 8,
abuseI am only on chapter 8, but I like the story. I was hesitant at the beginning when she said she was a sophomore, but she is very mature for her age and her roommates are very nice. I am definitely going to keep reading the story even thought it's really late. I guess I'm some kind of book freak or something, but I don't really care. Good job!
songlawyer
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuseFirst of all, I am very impressed that you would embark on such a long novel. I have not started the novel yet, but I will be sending reviews every couple of chapters to let you know. When I search these things, I purposely look for the longer stories and yours is, by far, the longest one yet. Let's see if the wording quality can complete with the huge quantity.
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