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| Reviews for The Difference Between You and Me |
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   Pinkie-Pie 6/10/12 . chapter 9Chapter 10 is missing and it was really coming along and now i miss the finsh of a little plot twister. |
| G 6/4/12 . chapter 46 wow..i really love your story! cant stop reading :) |
| Veox 6/3/12 . chapter 1 Hey queen of roses! there's probably a small chance of you reading this since the story is done.. guess i was late in finding this AWESOME STORY. I just can't resist the urge to tell you that it's not slow! It feeds my imagination whenever I read your detailed descriptions on the setting-leaving nothing behind-a complete progression of events, if i must say. I got hooked on the first chapter. Great job! |
| tenna shut up 5/30/12 . chapter 28 I love how there are allusions and references everywhere hahaha there was that bit about Jesse Tuck a few chapters back and now Into the Woods and a lot of others hahahaha gah this is sooooo fun to read |
| LadySimonOfWhiteBlueEyes 5/4/12 . chapter 10 ch 9 and 10 are missing... otherwise it is amayzing! |
| RT13 4/20/12 . chapter 9 Great story nd i just started. One thing though, chap 9 is currently non existent... |
| syntaxerroroftheheart 3/30/12 . chapter 1 I really like the bubble letters welcoming her to the new community! I, too, felt the warm nature of her roommate from the way you wrote the descriptions. I was a little bit confused about some of the syntax in the earlier sections on the bus, but that's just logistical stuff :-) |
| iAsterr 3/25/12 . chapter 52 I love it! You should do the sequel already. I can't wait for it. :D |
| twibbit 3/23/12 . chapter 52 :) amazing story :) |
| Arianna 2/5/12 . chapter 52 Hey.. Juz wanna tell you that this fic is awesome and u've done a great job. i'm glad that dom and eryn have their happy ending and they deserve it.. both of them are just sooo sweet. some of the parts were kinda short..i wish it was longer.. like how did the other teammates started to accept eryn.. it's a bit unrealistic. Other than that, u did a really really good job! *throws confetti* XDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
| Guest 2/3/12 . chapter 9 I really love this story! Your characters are interesting and different and the school is vividly described. A few notes of criticism though- for one, even though Eryn's life is soccer, you only spent half a chapter on soccer season... I think it would've been cool to see her become more friendly with the team and maybe the reactions of other teams when they see her as the only girl on the team in 8 years. The only other thing, I feel like Eryn forgives Dom waaaaaay too easy! She almost got expelled because of him, but they immediately become best friends with no mistrust of dislike at all? A little unbelievable. AND she was molested by him and hit by him, and she slept in the same bed as him? you could have given it a little more depth and guilted Dom maybe by having her be at lest a little upset and maybe flinching from his touch... I wouldn't trust a guy who just molested me, even if they were drunk. Okay, I know it sounds like I didn't like your story cause I just wrote a huge paragraph about what I didn't like, but I really do love it. I just love a good high school romance ;D I'm gonna keep reading now. |
| sexy beast 1/27/12 . chapter 52 PLEASE do a sequel! or an epilogue about how their life ended when they died together old and wrinkled(: that would be cute(: just don't give up on this story yet! please! |
| Music Note 1/25/12 . chapter 52 great story! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! |
| WordsFlowNaturally 1/19/12 . chapter 51 Great story, absolutley amaxing, I loved it! :) |
| loveL 1/4/12 . chapter 1 ommyyygooshhh I just love this story! It makes me cry, laugh, and everything in between! I would love to see a sequel, but this story by itself is perfect too :D |
