Hey. I've just finished reading this story and i have to admit, you have me hooked. You're brilliant at description and i get a clear picture of just what is going on.
I know you love flattery =) so i'll keep the constructive criticism to a minimum: there are a few too many commas than needed in places and a tiny amount of typos. Seriously though, other than that, ten out of ten. Both for plot and the way you get it across. Amazing. If you'd like me to i can try and point out typos and stuff for you, just to make your book one hundred percent phenomenal, (at the moment it's like 99.9%) heehee. I hope you like my review and if you have the time could you please take a look at my vampire story? Don't feel pressured into it though. Again, your story is excellent.

WAH!

Upload soon please!

It's really great!

:'(

Anyway, belated bday and uhmm...advance happy bday kc May na now.

Eheheh...

So, will Yamato have feelings for Aiya?

Well, will he?

UGH!

Boy, am I excited.

Wah...!

Love triangle?

Oh man...sana...

Yep...chancing tlgah,pro kilig.

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Great...

^_^

Heh...

Serves right for that bastard,nuff said.

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Please keep on updating.

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Eii...

I'm gettin a bit chummy here...

Great work though too short.

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Yay...!

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Cool!

Yeah, i like most of your works. They're cool.

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Please update soon.

OMG! OMG! OMG! I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next... I kinda think that Mimi (That's her name right?) might be the person behind everything. I don't know why... Heehee, whatever! lol. Update soon.

Dun Dun Dun!! Who is the unknown person...Aiya is going to kick their butt with a wooden staff! Also what is the history between Josiah and Yamato? I guess I'll have to wait for the 10th chappie huh?

DARN IT ALL!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!

Anyways this chapter rocked!! I loved it SO much!

Until Chappie 10

LoVe You!!

Niki!!

I wonder what happened a month ago!! Please let us know soon!!^__^ And I wonder who the unknown person is!! Please update soon, this is so exciting!!^__~

tol! astig ung story mo. :)

hey great story! wen i read it..i thought of it as Air Gear for some reason o_O.lol. i updated & sry how the prologue was so short. i wasn't planning on making a thorough explanation in the prologue. i'll try my best on this story, buh i hope u'll enjoy it ^^