 sin olvido 2007-03-16 . chapter 1YOUR: a possessive. "Your poetry needs to be edited."
YOU'RE: you are. "You're here already?"
Learn the difference. Spellcheck will not pick up on usage in the case of your/you're, their/there/they're, effect/affect, and so on. Have someone look over your poetry before you post it, and don't let it be a friend; those are partial to saving your self-esteem by lying. If you're in school, try an English teacher, as they're mighty helpful about looking over your work.
Don't capitalise random words; capitalise proper nouns (Euro Disney, Uncle Bernard, the Knights Templar), the first letter of a line of poetry (optional), and you get the drift.
"I Hope You Feel Better Steph" -- first of all, CAPITALISATION, agh. When addressing a person by name, add a comma, like this: "I hope you feel better, Steph."
"Hes" -- apostraphe necessary. Stands for "he is," therefore, "he's." |
 Leaving Here 2006-07-14 . chapter 1hey, a love peom for your special someone! AW!! its so cute! ok sry, forgot, your emo... you aren't considered 'cute' but thats judging...anyway, im confusing myself..good job on your love poem!~liz |