I would be mad, too. I hate it when people judge others because they wear black.

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Uh oh. The mother still doesn't know. When and how is she going to find out? ;)

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Aww, the poor thing. That would be awful!

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Nikki's a good friend. :)

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Sounds like she has a smart dad.

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Amy sounds like she is going to be a love interest. ;)

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At least she stood up for what she believed in even if she alienated herself.

It's good Nikki can be her friend. :)

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It's good she found a friend. I wonder what Nikki will do once she discovers her secret. ;)

Good chapter.

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Maria sounds like an interesting character and it sounds like a typical high school.

Good chapter.

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cool

Good beginning.

This story has potential.

I like the title and the plot.

Good luck with writing and this story.

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its so good, and I agree asian girls are beautiful.

Its sad that people can't except people who are different. at my school homophobia just isn't accepted, there are so many gay people (including our principal) that our sheer numbers keep the insults to a minimum (mostly cuz the most violent people in the school are gay and it would suicide to ge on there bad side! lol) where is this story taking place?

Wow! This is an amazing story! I'm dying to read more! :D Keep up the great work!

Aww, Amy was mean, I think. Good job.