Reviews for Jealousy
Faithless Juliet 7/17/06 . chapter 1
I like that!
Moondog Dozier 7/16/06 . chapter 1
Interesting contradiction. I like this. Good haiku.
a smile goes unnoticed 7/16/06 . chapter 1
nice, couldn't put it better myself, and i would probably take a 20 line poem.
Dale Christopher 7/15/06 . chapter 1
Awesome word choice. Flowed smoothly. You did mispell rebel, though.

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Nobody-n-Particular 7/15/06 . chapter 1
*rebel Nice haiku.