Aw, hon, that was amazing! I can't do poetry to sace my life, so I always love reading it from people who know what they're doing! SOory I haven't spoken to you in a while, but that doesn't mean I'm not still stalking you!

*stalk*

This is so pretty! I was particularly impressed by the last stanza... such a perfect description. I just loved the wording and metaphors.

ps- I'm writing you an e-mail. I stopped cause I had to go to the grocery store and now I'm going to bed so I'll talk to ya tommorow? tomorrow? I swear, I can never remember how to spell that word.

That was amazing! There is a great deal of personal effort in all your work that shines. It feels as though there are lifetimes of disappointment in those lines. They speak volumes for the pain of losing someone. I am not completely sure if that is where you were going with it, but that is the spin I took. But still, I absolutely loved it!

Pretty... the wording is amazing ... you're such a good writer!!