It sounds like poetic justice. it began with me wondering how the hell this little girl ended up with a my under her clutches, but by the end i was cheering for her, even if her name was amanda not kira.

Wow...that was...weird

Wow,this story is very good. It has a lot of metaphors that are very strong. It's a very good story. The only thing that I can realy critique is the fact that it might be a little vauge. You didn't realy catch my interest in the begining of the story. But it got a lot better as the story went on. That might have been just me but...idk. Over all it had good structure =)

OKay that was ** weiared ...but i like where u were going with it. Twisted not something i had in a while. Nicce Job.Thanxs for sharing>

BoBoBunny

oh that was one of the best I have read in a long time!! I love it!! You are a great writer!

well, that was very...colorful. im sure that I will sleep peacfully tonight. very nice imagery. especially the bit about the stuffing. only a true...writer as yourself could concieve of such a sick and twisted thing. i must give you props for that. now ima go read something happy. thank you.

OMGOSH that was SO creepy! i wanted 2 throw up when i read it. EW but a good ew. haha.

-YuLian