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| Michael Burlando 2006-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt sounds like poetic justice. it began with me wondering how the hell this little girl ended up with a my under her clutches, but by the end i was cheering for her, even if her name was amanda not kira. |
| Not Login At The Moment 2006-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...that was...weird |
| landslide900 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseWow,this story is very good. It has a lot of metaphors that are very strong. It's a very good story. The only thing that I can realy critique is the fact that it might be a little vauge. You didn't realy catch my interest in the begining of the story. But it got a lot better as the story went on. That might have been just me but...idk. Over all it had good structure =) |
| BoBoBunny 2006-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOKay that was ** weiared ...but i like where u were going with it. Twisted not something i had in a while. Nicce Job.Thanxs for sharing> BoBoBunny |
| Mandatehawesome 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseoh that was one of the best I have read in a long time!! I love it!! You are a great writer! |
| tff 2006-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abusewell, that was very...colorful. im sure that I will sleep peacfully tonight. very nice imagery. especially the bit about the stuffing. only a true...writer as yourself could concieve of such a sick and twisted thing. i must give you props for that. now ima go read something happy. thank you. |
| YuLian 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abuseOMGOSH that was SO creepy! i wanted 2 throw up when i read it. EW but a good ew. haha. -YuLian |