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| YoungInside 2007-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this a lot. It was really easy to relate to. A lot of people feel neglected at times.. and ignored. Keep up the good work. I'll review your story soon. Mind reviewing my stories as well? |
| S. Ben Beach 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI really like it how the words keep on drilling (pleading, laughing, hoping, ignoring, sighing, smiling...) and the frustration that comes out. I can definitely relate to this, sometimes you wish people took you seriously and listened. Really good stuff :) |
| JessieJean 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseThat's sad... And so true sometimes... And... Kinda dark, but not angst really... I like it very much (my postive grammar, hah); great work! |
| The Prettiest Banana 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseEasy to relate to, and has a good flow to it. Bravo. |
| tonicole 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abusethat's deep;i know how it feels to have people not listen to what you have to say. this spits the truth. |
| Evil-chan 2007-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesomeness. There was a point in my life when I could've totally related. I liked it and the ending is sad ;(...yeah. I like the line "When I'm sighing, you are smiling...", wuv it! Evil-chan |
| Cait Street 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abusewowowowowowow!!Amazing, and very true. I often find myslef thinking the exact same thing. The message was loud and clear. Loved it! |
| Vanishing Shadow 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseI like it, speaks of frustration with the world in genral and helplessness aginst it, much like I feel at times. At least it does to me, but if not, ignore me, I'm weird like that. Thanks for reviewing my poem 'The One', I've changed some things, PM me if you like them or not, please? Thanks, and good work! |
| Hole Buddies 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseyour was not used correctly a couple of times but that was all i saw to critisize and this was really good otherwise, i saw on your myspace that u like evanescence, hehe i love 'em nice job on the poem |
| Reed The Writer 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseI haven't posted in a while. i like this. it's how i feel about some of the people i care about the most. why doesn't anyone listen? very good. |
| Embellished Heart 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI feel this with my little brother. I hope one day he takes the ear plugs out before he permantly damages himslef. I was touched by this. Keep it up.Dana |
| Princess-anna57 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. I totally understand. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| NO LONGER USING 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuse...WOW...this shows so much emotion and I love it. Also shows how the characters are like polar oposites. btw I've got a story up called Superficially honest, that you might like. so go ahead and check it out if you haven;t already.. |
| BERRY*LICIOUS 2006-07-15 ch 1, | abusegood grief i know this feeling all too well! it makes a really good statement about how people actually just don't listen these days. kinda sad eh?i like the rhyming scheme for it too. it had a good flow! overall it was wonderful! |