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| La Gitane 2006-10-08 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really incredibly funny, in a bizarre way - I was snickering the whole way through. It's honestly very well written for something which could have quickly descended into badly penned crudery. Well done. :) |
| Arrows 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseHAHA! This is so creative and unique; I love it. I honestly have no critique becuase the narrator's voice really works, it's just perfect for the subject matter. Oh! Wait! I DID just notice something. It's TOW truck, not toe truck :P We all slip sometimes. Good job! =) |
| Modulated 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuse... No words for this. NO WORDS. Keep it up. |
| KM Barringer 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abusehah! that was good! |