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Reviews For: Show It To Me

La Gitane
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseThat was really incredibly funny, in a bizarre way - I was snickering the whole way through. It's honestly very well written for something which could have quickly descended into badly penned crudery. Well done. :)
Arrows
2006-08-24
ch 1,
abuseHAHA! This is so creative and unique; I love it. I honestly have no critique becuase the narrator's voice really works, it's just perfect for the subject matter.

Oh! Wait! I DID just notice something. It's TOW truck, not toe truck :P We all slip sometimes.

Good job! =)
Modulated
2006-07-16
ch 1,
abuse...

No words for this. NO WORDS.

Keep it up.
KM Barringer
2006-07-16
ch 1,
abusehah! that was good!
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