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| Sasquatch 2008-03-23 ch 2,  | abusefun fun! |
| two pounds at half price 2007-06-21 ch 2, | abuseoh my dear sepplin! i haven't reviewed this sotry yet! zeus and toast! well.. uh.. yes... just to let you know, this is lovely in every fraction and second and word of itself. |
| the ever faithful hairpin 2007-02-01 ch 2, | abuse::snickers:: Oh I laughed at this. Especially at Chaie and his reactions to things like the curse and...uh...waking up naked with someone XD And the tattoo! ::loves upon:: And...and this bit especially: “You’re not upset are you...Or did you want another go?” ::laughs:: Thank you for brightening up my day :D |
| pneumothorax 2006-07-28 ch 2, | abuseIntruiging continuation. I like this. Apologies for lack of input. |
| pneumothorax 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseThe beginning seemed possibly better written, but not too much. I like this, it's interesting and I'm glad you explained the curse better because initially that confused me. |
| just you and yourself 2006-07-19 ch 2, | abuselol, i loved the beginning. and i can't wait to find out about Chaie"s mom's reaction when she realises who Chaie married. |
| rainbowskye 2006-07-19 ch 2, | abuseMore cuteness ^_^ Marrying each other was a great idea to avoid having to marry someone else. And healing the pants, made me laugh! |
| rainbowskye 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, so cute! And wonderfully descriptive without being too much. I like how the world that they live in is well developed and easy to understand without lots of explanation which would interrupt the flow. Really cute (although I alreadynsaid that) ^_^ |