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| crinkled aster ribbon 2006-08-01 ch 1,  | abusei... love this. ♥ i adore each and every stanza of this poem. |
| reldancer 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseamazing. that's all i have to say |
| a lonely september 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abusewoah. this is incredible. totally getting a fave from me, since it's just freakin amazing. i love it. the ending is mindblowing. |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseoh, for that last stanza. perfect. |
| bread and circuses 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI think this has to be one of the most perfect poems I've read. The last stanza is so amazing and painful, I get shivers. The whole things seems so perfectly constructed. It's definitely a favourite. |
| the.pink.life 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI gotta agree with poetic abortion on this one. That last line is sensational. What an image! Seriously. Gorgeous. Keep writing! :) |
| poetic abortion 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuse"all i know is you bleed like pigment on a wet page when i touch you & it’s the most terrifying thing i know." - I want to claim that I made that line; seriously, I love it so muc. Gorgeous, gorgeous and utterly poignant, haunting, line. Love it. (Oh, and the rest of the poem is, in partcicular, delicate and charming and pretty-beautiful.) ~* Noelle |
| Neteri Bennu 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. ~ Neteri Bennu |