   Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 9Interesting tale. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 8 Nice closing. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 7 I like the first line esp. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 6 Interesting leading an abstract word like "legend." |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 5 Well, now I think you are straying from the haiku format, although still interesting. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 4 This one is a bit random,but nice imagery. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 3 I particularly liked "the impact of love/dulls the sting" NIce connection with the whole "wasp" description. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 2 Nice imagery. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 1 INteresting. |
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